For this piece I chose the assignment "Inside of a closet." I'm going to a rodeo later today so I thought I'd do a western theme for this piece. I draped my western show jacket over my guitar and placed my riding boots in front of it. I tried to do another stylized piece in water color because its quick, easy, and doesn't take a lot of time. I think this one looks absolutely terrible; probably because I didn't spend a lot of time on it because I completely forgot I had to do it. Hopefully either before school starts or during the school year I can redo this piece because I think it has some serious potential, especially if I do it in more detail! This is a 9"x12" sheet of paper.
I'm going to agree with you here, to a lesser extent. I don't think that the piece is terrible but I definitely don't think that it conveys your talent! I'd like to see you re-do it on a better sheet of paper and play up the values more.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoy the open composition you've created here as well as the way you create your own theme from the prompt. I do agree with Laney, I'd like to see the values reworked more. I think it's a great start, you just need to push yourself a bit further on this one. I do also enjoy of the textured brushwork, it'd be interesting to see that emphasized.
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